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Hello, it's me Darwin 3288765, and I'm here to review the fan-fiction The Runaway (also known as Darwin Runsaway) by Doctor.wii, who suggested that I review it.

Plot - 7.5 / 10 - Doctor.wii actually surprises me with the plot to his stories, especially this one. The story is that Darwin feels rejected after his crush Aguilera rejects him after he asks her to be his date to the school ball. So he reaction is to run away as Gumball, Fireball (Gumball's older brother according to Doctor.wii), and Aguilera try to find him. Darwin eventually returns and, as expected, Aguilera apoligizes to him for being a jerk. Oh, and they sing a song telling Darwin to come home in the same vain of the Phineas and Ferb song "Perry Come Home". So, what's the one thing that gets this a 7.5? The grammar. I don't want to be rude Doctor.wii (or offensive), but you have got to edit your grammar. It helps me figure what the heck is going on with the story.

Characters - 6 / 10 - Meh, the characters are ok. Not too good, not too bad. Just ok.

Total Grade - 6.7 / 10 - It's not as good as some other well-estblished stories here, but Doctor.wii does try his best to deliver a well put fan-fiction. I give him credit for some creative moments of the fan-fiction, but as a whole the story is a bit unappealing and too bland. Again, it's not that bad, it's just not great in a sense. But at least you tried. Darwin 3288765 out.

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